This post, copied from Poul Anderson Appreciation, is a sequel to Poul Anderson Update, also on Poul Anderson Appreciation:
OK. I have struggled to the end of John Brunner's Threshold Of Eternity (New
York, 1959). I now think that this work is a text book example of how
not to write about time travel. Both the narrative and the dialogue
present a series of statements that are at at best incomprehensible and
at worst incoherent with an apparent assumption that all such statements
are clear and unproblematic for the reader.
For example:
"'Assume
that the universe has a strong tendency to remain unified. Our original
researches into four-dimensional existence suggested that probability.
Then my going-double might have been firmly under the impression that he
had remained in his own present and was giving information to the
[another character] of his own present. However, if that information had
been acted upon, it would have ironed out one of the distinctions
between the two time-streams. Follow me?'
"'I do indeed...'" (p. 118)
Do you?
I
was going to check how Brunner described his characters visiting a
historical period. Not as well as Anderson. Brunner's characters dip in
and out of the seventeenth century and quickly return to their preferred
environment of spaceship interiors. Anderson often evokes the feel of
an era by listing the sights, sounds and smells encountered by a time
traveler on entering an ancient city. Brunner approaches this in just
one paragraph about The Hague:
"Passing men laden with
goods, men selling fresh water from barrels, itinerant vendors of
needles, distinguished citizens with attendants, rough artisans,
slatternly women, they were predominantly conscious of one thing - a
stink which was almost nauseating...from upper story windows
maidservants were casually tossing night slops into the streets, horses
padded through the muddy pools leaving the inevitable signs of their
passage..." (p. 85)
But we need far more than this to give us any sense of people, including visiting time travelers, living in that period.
Also,
as I suspected, the men of different epochs fighting the space-time war
on planets of different cultures exist only in the blurb and not in the
text.
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